The Secret Love

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Karina-The-One-And-Only, Dec 21, 2011.

  1. Ashley got a room next to Danny the next day. He helped her carry her stuff there. He set her new Television on the Table and installed it. Danny finished in 20 Minutes.

    "Well thanks again Danny." Ashley said.

    "Yea, sure anytime." He shook her hand and left.
    As soon as Danny left Ashley got a call. It was Chloe calling.

    "Hey Ashley, Good Job. You finally broke up with Danny and today is the first of June. Prom is tomorrow. I hope you found a date." Chloe said laughing.

    "Goodbye Chloe." Ashley said and hung up.

    Danny got a call from Nicole for Prom and he Accepted. Adam called Ashley later.

    "So Ashley, You know that prom is coming up and I was just wondering If you will go to Prom with me?" He asked.

    "Of course Adam , Come over to my Room and let's go buy you a tux and me a Nice pretty Dress." Ashley said.

    "Ok what Room Number are you?" He asked.

    "Room 116, It's right next to Danny's." She said.

    "Ok I'll be right there."He said and hung up the phone.

    Adam arrived at her room and entered. She invited him in for awhile. They sat on the bed talking and finally left. They soon arrived at the Store. Adam got his tux first.

    "How's This one?" He asked.

    "Too Big." She said.

    "How about this one?" He asked.

    "Perfect."

    Soon it was Ashley's turn to pick a Dress. Danny and Nicole walked in the store and Danny saw Ashley. He told Nicole to go find him a Tux while he goes to the bathroom. Danny spied in Ashley. Although he didn't know who she was with.

    "This one? It's Yellow." She asked.

    "Get the purple one see how that one looks on you." Adam said.

    "There."
    Adam stood up and Danny saw him. Adam held her hands.

    "You Look Beautiful in that Ashley." He said.
    They kissed and Danny got jealous and went to Nicole. Danny got a tux and Nicole got a Yellow Dress. The Next Day was Prom. Adam picked up Ashley and they left. Danny went to pick up Nicole. Danny soon arrived At Prom and saw Adam And Ashley kissing. He went to Dance with Nicole.
     
  2. I dun like Danny anymore :s
     
  3. NORELATIONSHIP CRISIS
     
  4. I dun like either of themCheaters
     
  5. Bump Update ASAP

    I might have time tomorrow to update or right now but I'll try tomorrow too.
     
  6. "So you like Prom so far Nicole?" Danny asked.

    "Yes it's great, I'm spending it with you." Nicole said. She kissed him on the cheek.

    "Ashley, you are so beautiful." Adam said.

    "Yes, Thank You Adam." Ashley said a little annoyed because he kept saying it.

    "If you don't mind I'm going to step outside a bit for some fresh air." Ashley said.

    "Sure No problem, But hurry back." Adam said and kissed her.

    Danny saw Ashley leave so he made an excuse to get fresh air. He saw Ashley standing next to a tree. He walked to her. He was going to talk to her but she was on the phone with a friend.

    "Yes, I know that he isn't the one but after the breakup I thought he would comfort me." Ashley said.

    "All I wanted was for him to propose because I know that Danny is the one and I want him back but he'll just dump me, Well I have to head back inside to Adam. Bye." Ashley said and hung up the phone.

    Danny hid so she wouldn't know he was spying on her. Ashley walked inside and Danny was in Shock.

    "Propose! That's all I had to do? I was going to propose after the Prom but we broke up! Ugh! What have I done?" Danny said to himself. He went inside but Nicole stopped him.

    "Hey Danny, Let's schedule a date tonight after the Prom." She said.

    "I'll see Nicole." He said.

    "Let's go outside Ashley while Everyone dances for an hour." Adam said. They went outside and Danny had to go there too.

    "Hey I have an idea let's hang outside right now! Let's go Nicole!" He said and they went outside. Adam was hugging Ashley. Danny stopped him.

    "Alright that's enough Adam you can leave now." Danny said.

    "What are you doing Danny?" Nicole asked but was ignored.

    "Go away Danny she wants nothing to do with you." Adam explained.

    "Listen Ashley, is this your future? Adam? We are graduating this year and you are going to stay with Adam? Look, we were wrong to break up. We are meant to be together! Ashley, I love You." Danny said.

    Danny had his ring with him and got down on one knee.

    "Ashley, Will You Marry Me?" Danny asked.

    Ashley in shock let go of Adam.

    "I Love You Danny. Yes!" She yelled and kissed Danny.

    Adam punched Danny and it started a fight. Eventually the police came and arrested Adam for starting the fight. Nicole walked up to Danny.

    "Trader!" She yelled and slapped Danny four times. Ashley kissed the spots he was slapped on.

    "I never should've let you go too Danny." She said softly. Ashley and Danny hugged.
     
  7. *traitor.
    The sequence of events on this story are completely unrealistic.
     
  8. What?!? Am I supposed to believe that he casually had a ring in his pocket, and that only one of them got busted?!?
     
  9. It's just a story :roll:
     
  10. No! You must make good story or I kill you and your family!
     
  11. This is a good story!
     
  12. But but but it has bad grammar and makes no sense!