The Secret Love

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Karina-The-One-And-Only, Dec 21, 2011.

  1. Haters are my motivators 
     
  2. xP. Sorry I be hatin'. It's the truth, from my perspective xD
     
  3. Haters make me famous
    I'm very famous
     
  4. Ashley and Danny kissed for what seemed like forever and that's the way they wanted it to be. They started to walk home when they saw Mike with John and his friends.

    "You never should let her go Danny, because the only way to end you two is by ending you, making her forced to break up with you since you will be dead." Mike said.

    Danny held Ashley's hand. He looked at him angry.

    "Get lost Mike,we want no part of you. Plus you have no muscles so I can beat you up easily." Danny said proudly but angry at the same time.

    "True true, that's why I won't be the one killing you and if you hurt me in any way John and his ripped friends will go after you killing you." Mike said with a smirk.

    "So who is going to kill me?" Danny asked.

    "Ashley."

    "What?!"

    "What?! I'm not going to kill my fiancé! You're crazy!" Ashley yelled.

    "Well Ashley, if you refuse I'll have to kill you and then him."

    Danny looked at Ashley and held her hands.

    "Ashley you have to do this to save your own life."

    "No, I don't want to lose you again!"

    "Trust me you won't. I'll look at you from heaven making sure you're safe and happy. Just do this. I love you sweetie and I'll never forget you." Danny said and kissed her never letting go.


    Mike got bored of the long kiss.


    "Are you done yet?"Mike asked.

    "How about now?"Mike asked.

    "Hello?"Mike asked.

    "Ok now you guys are just stalling! Give Ashley a gun John!" Mike yelled.

    Ashley and Danny were separated and John walked up to Ashley.

    "Don't worry you still have me." John said laughing.

    Ashley pointed the gun to Danny.

    "I can't do it!" Ashley said.

    "Do it for your safety babe. I love you!" Danny yelled.

    "I love you too...." Ashley said and pulled the trigger.
     
  5. That's so unrealistic, she would have obviously shot the other guys...
     
  6. It's a story. It's supposed to be made up unless it's based on true events or the type of genre.
     
  7. But this type of story is meant to be told in a realistic fashion.
     
  8. I agree with happiness.
     
  9. U guys don't realize the author is going to start off the next update with "Danny felt alive. He hadn't been shot. Danny looks around and mike and John are dead on the ground." Something like that
     
  10. Not exactly Steltzee33. I'm actually starting this differently and I'm ending it now.
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    Danny fell to the ground. He felt his heart slowing down and found it hard to breathe soon. Ashley ran over to him crying.

    "Danny, our love will live forever." Ashley said.

    "I'm dying... Ashley, you have to move on once I'm dead." He replied.

    Ashley held back her tears. She saw the gun in her hand still and she took a deep breath.

    "Mike, first of all why didn't you ever want me to have a boyfriend? Second, why did you make me kill him?" Ashley asked.

    "First, I was afraid he won't understand how to treat a girl and hurt you. Second, because you never told me about him when you should have. Now you face the consequences sister and come home back with me." Mike said with a chuckle.

    Ashley looked over at Danny. He was about to die when he takes his last breath. She took the gun and pointed it at herself.

    "I won't be coming home with you Mike. Danny, I love you." Ashley said and pulled the trigger.

    Mike fell to the ground after seeing his sister kill herself. He remembered his parents dying and being all alone with Ashley protecting her because she was the only think he had left. Now he is alone. He could only imagine being alone in the house. The house will be so quiet, no fighting, and no talking. He picked up her body and put it into his car trunk and put Danny's body in the trunk too. Mike closed the trunk and headed for his backyard.

    Mike built two caskets. He placed Ashley in one and Danny in the other. He dug two holes for them and buried them. He put a picture of Ashley right next to her body and a picture of Danny next to his body. Mike put away his shovel and headed inside.

    "I guess that's it." He whispered to himself.

    "I never thought it would end like this." He said.

    Forty years later, Mike is in his retirement home. He looks up in the sky remembering his sister. He remembered his big mistake and regretting it.

    "What a fool I am." He said to himself.

    Mike soon died in of a heart attack two weeks later. He had his funeral and was buried next to Ashley. Mike realized before his death that he had never told Ashley that he loved her. He thought maybe that's why she didn't like him too,because he didn't seem to like her but he did. When he was buried inside his casket was pictures of Ashley and a picture of a heart. Mike had his secret love that was never revealed.
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    It's probably a bad ending but I had to end it. I have other things I have to do everyday causing me to be very tired and I have another story I'm writing called Bully and I had to finish this one. Well thanks for reading!
     
  11. This was a bad story anyway.