Lovely Betrayal

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -iEmiHaveHimTrippinForDays, Nov 3, 2012.

  1. <_< AYE! NO ONE KILLS MY BABY! NOT UNLESS ITS ME AND IF HE DOES SOMETHING REALLY BAD! which i doubt he is such a sweet heart
     
  2. an joseph dont listen to them... they crazy
     
  3. Yah Joseph I think u should be in it
     
  4. UPDATE AND BUMP!
     
  5. It would be an honor. Even if it was a small part. It would be cool.
     
  6. Nobodys killin anyone
     
  7. Fine I wont kill him... Unless you don't update please
     
  8. <_< yu still wont do anything
     
  9. How is the story supposed to get finished if an update isn't put up
     
  10. -.- yu'll have to wait... im working on my update and im baby sitting
     
  11. Must be hard to do both
     
  12. It is when yur watching 2 kids that dont stay still
     
  13. Luckly i dont have to watch my brother.
     
  14. OMGI LOVE THIS STORY AND I CAN'T WAIT TO KICK SOMEONE ELSE'S ASS
     
  15. Here's my update I know its kinda short
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    I woke up to Therese and Veronica jumping on me. They kept chanting. "Em get up we're gonna be late!" I glared at them, they quickly got off and walked out the room.

    I put on an off the shoulder shirt black tights and my baige boots. I walked down stairs with my hair straight. We grabbed our bags and walked out to Zachs car.

    Tate was already in the front seat wearing my superman snapback. I looked at him and laughed a little.

    "I told you its mine now." He said and laughed

    "Whatever Tate." I replied with a chuckle

    Zach picked up his girlfriend Angi. We all sat there laughing at Tates stupid joke abour clowns.

    When we go to school I left my friends and walked over to Karls car. I saw Ashleen there leaning on him like if he was her girlfriend. I just stood there and shook my head.

    They looked over. Ashleen turned and faced him. She turned his face and now they were seeing eye to eye. She quickly leaned in and kissed him.

    My heart sank. It felt like I was dying. All of my friends looked. They were in shock. I slid to the floor. Hot tears ran down my face. I felt so dizzy. My anxiety was rushing. My vision blurred at little. All I could really grasp was people calling my name. What the hell just happened? he kissed her. Why infront of me?! I thought. My vision was coming back to me. I saw Therese and Veronica run towards Ashleen and Karl. What were they gonna do?
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    AH! WHY?! Find out later on
     
  16. Omg!!!!!!! Karl I hate u!