Lovely Betrayal

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -iEmiHaveHimTrippinForDays, Nov 3, 2012.

  1. you know I love you an your stories 
     
  2. i know and i love you and your story too.... 
     
  3. Can I be in it? You said I could before you started it 
     
  4. 0.0 Zach yu are just not atm
     
  5. Love it hun
     
  6. Love the story.....
     
  7. My favorite characters are probably Karl, Emily and her friends. At least for some of my favorites but as for my favorite character who is not friends or boyfriend of Emily would probably be Ashleen since she may be a bit of a snob or a bit cruel, but still awesome
     
  8. cool ill be updating later on k
     
  9. Really 
     
  10. This is really good 

    Update 
     
  11. Update!!!!!!
     
  12. Here's a little update for my lovely readers
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    I woke up the next day. I looked around my purple and blue wall then at the clock. It was 6:45 a.m. 15 minutes early. I thought. I got off my bed took a shower. I came back to my closet and took out my purple sweater and my purple chucks. I then grabbed my white skinny's got dressed and curled the ends of my ponytail.

    I went downstairs ad didn't say a word to my mom or bader. I walked out the door and called zach.

    "Hello?" He answered

    "Hey Zach I need a ride to school. Can you pick me up?" I asked

    "Sure no problem." He said and hung up.

    5 minutes had passed and he arrived at my house. I got in and greeted Tate, Veronica an Therese.

    When i got to school I saw that Karl was already there. He walked passed me when I got out the car.He had his arm around her shoulder.

    "What the hell?" Zach muttered

    I felt so angry, so hurt, so betrayed. I walked over to and stood in front of him. I broke the neckless he gave me off my neck and put it in his hand. I could tell people were staring. I started to cry and ran off.

    I pushed my way through the crowd. I heard Veronica and the others run after me. I ran into the janitors closet to hide away and cry. A few minutes had passed. I was done crying. I dried my eyes and walked out. I hit someone with the door by accident.

    "Ow!" They said

    I looked and saw it was Chris. "Im so sorry chris i didnt see you"

    "Its fine." He replied with a chuckle

    I turned and walked off. The late bell had wrang when i reached the door. I walked in the class.

    "Your late Ms.Martinez" Mrs.Patterson said

    "I know I'm sorry." I said and took a seat. I stayed looking down. My eyes were so puffy. Veronica had looked at me and then looked down.

    A note had landed on my desk. I opened it an read it. It was from Karl.

    "Babe what's the matter with you? Your acting like if I'm doing something wrong. It needs to stop I dont like it. It seems like its hurting our relationship."

    I crumpled up the paper and threw it in the trash can. I avoided him all day. When the final bell wrang I walked over to my locker and saw someone wrote on it. I couldnt believe what it said. I grew furious. I just wanted to hit someone.
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    Aww man
     
  13. Love it 
     
  14. yeahh' even though yur character is being a jerk right now 
     
  15. BUMP