Meiqing's pov ---------------------------------- I come back from the back with a new smoothie for the guy and a mop to clean up the mess. I see Allie cleaning up so I go to help out. Afterwards I help her get the smoothie out of her and returns the guys money for the smoothie since I spilled it on him. Jake's pov --------------------------------- I see the girl from before come back with a new smoothie in one hand and a mop in the other. Turns out the two girls are friends. They both help each other out and I'm just loving both of them.
I like details but it's longer to read but I don't care about that as long as it is something readable
Meiqing's pov --------------------------------------- After that whole mess I went on break and we all sat down at a nearby table and chatted for a bit. Allie and Jake told me how they met and I was glad that she had a friend at her new school. But I could tell she liked him by the way she talked and looked at him..... Jake's pov ------------------------------- I'm so glad Meiqing wa able to get a break then because we were then all able to talk. Allie and Meiqing were telling me about themselves and their long close friendship. It then made me realize that I would have to choose who I wanted to really like.....
When you said "Allie and Jake told me how they met" you can write what they were saying. And again, DETAILS!
Do u seriously write everyday? Sounds like a friend of mine who signed up so this essay thing. She's gotta write an essay every week then turn it in. Ugh I'd hate to do that