Love and Loss

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -Miss_Author_Shana_Alana-, Apr 1, 2012.

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  1. What? Just...what? This doesn't make sense...I'd assume the security would be tighter, the people would be tougher, and there wouldn't be a dance...they killed people for Christ's sake! This doesn't make sense to my logical brain. ._.
     
  2. Ya, it doesn't make that much sense, but it's still an AMAZING story. I feel so happy for Josh, and Alex!
     
  3. What? The main character's name is Cara...
     
  4. Lol I know!
     
  5. Woops, sorry I was talking to my friend Alex hahahaha I'm so embaressed. I do that a lot 
     
  6. OMG I am really embaressed I can't believe I did that! Meanwhile Alex is sitting here cracking up
     
  7. And plus, manslaughter can get you life and beyond in a maximum security prison .-.
    A child like that would need therapy, and lots of it. Three years?!? More like eighty years in an adult prison for manslaughter and the illegal carrying of firearms without a permit.
    But mostly, y'know, killing your entire family is kind of...yeah...
     
  8. Lol I love how this person is like out smarting the author! Hahaha 
     
  9. Dude f u it's her writing it doesn't have to have a bunch of research in it it's not a essay Jesus Christ xD
     
  10. I know it's just funny how they keep correcting the author. But I still agree with you rainbow dash.
     
  11. Still a good story.

    Aww Josh is nervous 
     
  12. I'm assuming this is a realistic fiction type of story. And in doing so, it would have the inclination to be accurate and make sense.
     
  13. I saw your questions and I have made major changes, rob, josh, and cara are 16, Cammy is 17, Zara is 13, Kate and Hayley are 15 and Marty is 12. Does that make since? Second, the dance is to make people more social and easier around people. And third the hell or whatever you want to call it is a chance to make them change, so there are the answers.
     
  14. Wait...but in the biginning it says rob is 13...i just checked
     
  15. Yeah I know, I soon realised that and changed it.
     
  16. Ok, so, who wants an update? Or do y'all want to wait longer?
     
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