Love and Loss

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -Miss_Author_Shana_Alana-, Apr 1, 2012.

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  1. I like Rob he is so silly!
     
  2. Lol, I love Rob, and he is based on a friend of mine named Robert
     
  3. Need an idea! What should my next chapter be called? And this chapter is is Rob's POV!
     
  4. Ok, it's been a while but I finally got rid of writers block and I now have a new chapter!

    Rob's POV
    Whacked Up

    When I ran into the door I was in a daze. When it opened I yelled, "FOOD!" I ran to the cafeteria to get my food as fast as I could. I sat down and shoved food in my mouth. When Cara, Kate, Cammy, and the other girls came in I couldn't speak right. Then Kate, Cara, Hayley started giggling when I tried to say hi. Then Marty and and Josh came in.
    "Hi, everyone," Josh said.
    "Hi, Josh," Cara said.
    "Hi, Cara," he replied. God, could he be anymore obvious?
    When Cara left for a second, Zara raved about Josh loving her. When Cara came back, Zara and her raved about the dance coming up in about six weeks. I started laughing with Josh, Marty and Kate about Zara's sudden girlyness. Then I heard, "Josh or Rob," from Zara. I bet she suggested Cara's date choices.
    We finished dinner and left to our dorms.
    "You need to ask, soon," I said.
    "What," Josh replied.
    "Ask Cara soon! Or I will."
    Josh sighed, "Only if you ask Cammy, after all I'm nervous enough."
    "Fine I will, but you ask when I do, deal?"
    Josh smiled, "Deal, you b*stard."
    I smirked. I was not asking Cammy to the dance, even though I do like her a lot, I never will admit it to her.

    Josh's POV
    Asking Cara

    I was really nervous. Rob said that I should just ask. I had only less than 2 weeks to ask. I was still nervous about asking Cara. It was the Saturday before the deadline.
    "Hey, Cara," I greeted. "Can I talk to you for a minute, alone?"
    "Sure," Cara replied. Cara and I walked away from our friends.
    "Cara, I was wondering..."
    "Yes?"
    "Would you like to go tho the 5th Annual Summer Dance with me?" I asked nervously.
    "Oh, Josh, thank you but... I already have a date," Cara said sadly.

    WHAT?! Another guy?! Oh, my! 
     
  5.  S*** JUST GOT FOR REAL! LOL PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
     
  6.  UPDATE!
     
  7. Who do you think asked her?
     
  8. Rob. Maybe...:) idk.!! Hehehe
     
  9. ROY!!!!!!!!
     
  10. Alright, here is the update! Hope y'all like it!

    Cara's POV
    Josh's Disappointment

    "...I already have a date," I said sadly. It broke my heart to tell him.
    "What?" Josh asked. "Who asked you?"
    "A lot of guys. I was turning all of them down so I could be asked by you! But you never asked and I was getting worried. And Rob asked me yesterday and I said yes. I wanted to say no but, you never asked. I am really sorry..."
    Josh looked furious. "I'll talk to Rob later. In the meanwhile, good luck with him." He walked off and I felt so bad.
    I walked to our group and said, "I'm not feeling very good. I'm going to head back to the dorm."
    "I'll walk you," Cammy said and got up.
    We started walking. When we were out of ear shot she asked, "What happened?"
    "Josh finally asked me to the dance..." I paused.
    "That's great!"
    "... but I told him Rob had already asked me."
    "Oh, that sucks, newbie, I mean, Cara."
    "Yeah," I replied sadly.
    "He is going to come with me, I'll talk to him when I get back. That way you can still be with him and I'll be with Rob."
    "Thank you, Cammy." I opened the door and went to my bed to relax. Then I gently and slowly fell asleep.

    Rob's POV
    Asking Cara

    Friday, before the dance I did something I never should have done, but I did to piss Josh off.
    I found Cara in the middle of the classes the Hell makes us take."Hey, Cara, can I talk to you?"
    Cara turned around, "Yeah! What's up?"
    "Um, would you like to got to the dance with me?" I asked awkwardly.
    "Oh, um..." I could tell she was thinking about Josh.
    "He's not gonna ask, Cara. He is too shy."
    Cara sighed, "Sure, I guess, just as friends though, okay?"
    "Sure!" I replied. Josh was going to be pissed!

    Josh's POV
    Beat Up

    "Rob, can I talk to you for a minute?" I asked, pissed.
    "Sure, man!" Rob got up and walked over to me. "What's up, man?"
    "What the hell is wrong with you asking Cara out before me?!" I yelled.
    "Whoa, dude, chill!" he yelled back.
    "I can't, you asked her before I did! You know I was going to ask her!"
    Rob pushed me. "It's not like you were going to! You were to f*cking shy!"
    "Rob, I thought you were my friend! You are such a f*cking jack*ss!" I pushed him back.
    "Yeah, well, maybe you shouldn't be such a f*cking as*hole!"
    I swung at him and hit his jaw. Then he tackled me and we started fighting. Finally after ten minutes of the bloody fight, Dominique, the head of staff, broke us up.
    "Who started this here?!" she exclaimed.
    "Rob, he pushed me and then we started throwing some punches," I replied first. Rob dabbed his bloody nose and I felt the long scratch above my eye.
    "Let's get you two to the nurse and then Rob, you are going to the Hot Box"
    Rob nodded and sighed.
    "And I am going to tell Cara she needs to find a new date for the dance," Dominique added.
    I smiled. I could finally ask. Cara was mine for the dance!
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    Who was expecting that?!! 
     
  11. Meeeeee!  love this story!!!!!
     
  12. I'm not updating again until I get more bumps. And I have something written already.
     
  13. UPDATENOW!!
     
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