He will never know

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -iEmiHaveHimTrippinForDays, Dec 24, 2012.

  1. Bump!

    I'm in it!
    Yay..!
     
  2. ^_^ gonna update tonight!
     
  3. UPDATE!!!!
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    I sighed and decided I'll go hang out with someone tonight. After all it is friday, yes I know what your thinking starting school on friday? That's dumb. But, hey atleast we only have one day til' the weekend. I decided to call Amanda.

    "Nessa boo!" She screeched

    "Oh gosh. Hehe Hey Amanda."

    "What's up?"

    "What are you doing tonight?"

    "Nothing, Hanging with Maddy."

    "Mind if I come over? Maybe we can head to the mall."

    "Of course! I'll drive! I've been meaning to get some new clothes."

    "Great! I'll see you then."

    "Kk bye!"

    We hung up and I felt so relieved with going out. I get my mind of Jaden and I get new clothes. This night couldn't get any better. I jumped up out bed and over looked myself in my full-length mirror making sure my jeans and over sized sweater were straightened out. I slipped on my toms and did a little touch up on my light make up and fixed my hair, I grabbed my money that I have been saving for a car, I mean I can start again later right? Satisfied, I smiled and scurried down the stairs like a happy child going to the candy store.

    Mom wasn't home yet, so I left her a note saying that I was going out with Amanda and Maddy. I locked my house and walked down the long 2 blocks as the sun was setting and the sky was a pinkish blue color. I couldn't feel better. I look good, I'm going out shopping with my girls. Before I knew it I was walking up Amanda's path way to her door. I went to
    knock when the door flew open and Maddy came jumping on me.

    "NESSA!!!"

    "Ahhh! hahaha... Hey Maddy."

    "Hey Nessa." Amanda said as she locked her door heading to her car.

    "I suggest we go because my dad is having football re-run night with his co-workers." She continued.

    "Oh ok." I said walking to the front seat.

    We got in the car and plugged in Amanda's Ipod listening to We run the night. As Amanda pulled out he drive way Maddy and I were singing along. Amanda was tapping on yhe steering wheel singing and laughing. Man, I love these girls. They always know how to better my mood.

    Amanda didn't live to far from the mall. It was probably about 15-20 minute drive. She pulled into a parking close to the door. I sighed looking around to see if I saw Jaden's car. Nope no sign of it.

    "Ladies shall we?" Maddy asked

    Amanda and I nodded our heads and exited the car. We walked inside laughing and making jokes about stupid movie posters. Did you know that the Harry Potter movie poster looks like Harry is pointing at you like "I will poke your tickle spot with my wizard wand! Don't you test me!"?

    "Uh oh. Nessa don't look now. But, Jaden is coming over here." Amanda said looking at me.

    "And he's with her. But, she's leaving on her own." Maddy added

    I looked over only to bump into Jaden right behind me. I could feel my face getting hot. Oh no, here it goes again. The heart pounding, palm sweating, breathe taking moment of being this close to him.

    "Nessa! I have been looking for you and calling your phone." He said enthusiasticly.

    "My phone? CRAP! I left it home!"

    "Anyways Nessa. Mind if we talk alone?"

    I looked to see if Amanda and Maddy were still there. Great! Those shopping freaks left me! Ugh, why me? Why now?! I can't just stand here. Agree Nessa! AGREE!

    "Ok sure."

    "Great come on."

    He took me hand and led me into one of the hall ways the holds the bathrooms and an exit. My heart was pounding. What's going on? What does he want to talk about? Oh man! This is way to intense! Amanda! Maddy! Where are you guys?! Distracted by my thought Jaden pushed me against the wall.

    "Nessa, I-I love you."

    "Wha...What?"

    "I love you Vanessa."

    I was such a loss for words. My mind was amazed at what he told me. I was in such a shock. Jaden Mark McAdams loves me! ME!!!! Oh my god! My crush loves me! I felt electric pulses surging through my body as he pressed his lips against mine. His soft lips against mine. Him pulling me close as we kiss.

    "Vanessa. Be mine."

    Whoa! What just happened? Did Jaden just ask me out?!
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     OMG THEIR TOGETHER!
    But! There's always a twist to this love
     
  4. BUMP!! Can't wait update now 
     
  5. Update or I'm going to never update my story mwauhahaha
     
  6. Hmmm interesting.. Maybe he only asked nessa because the other girl turned him down know that they have a thing.. Love it
     
  7. omg bump!!!!!
     
  8.  Sheesh harsh spoiler.... Thats not what happened ._. Please do not guess ahead of the story that takes the funnout of writing it..
     
  9. Only when they know what's going to happen we're just guessing which is what one does in a book
     
  10. >.< I know but you guys guess my ideas!
     
  11. Sorry didnt mean too:/ just oh i forget what its called something like foreshadowing or somethig lol. Sorry wont do it again
     
  12. Love it! Can't wait to see what happens!