He will never know

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -iEmiHaveHimTrippinForDays, Dec 24, 2012.

  1. Great job and I am a wingman! Well sometimes
     
  2. You weirdo!
     
  3. Gonna try and update soon
     
  4. Hope you like this update!'
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    ***Jaden's POV***

    I have to make her mine. I want her so badly! But, I also want someone else. I'm so stuck. I want Vanessa but I also want that someone else. I sighed and leaned back into my chair ignoring every word my teacher was saying. The imprinted dots on the ceiling tiles getting my dizzy. I sat up and laid my head on my desk.

    -Ring!!-
    I jumped up and darted out the room. My memory of what happened before class replayed. I held Nessa close. She smelled amazing. Her dark hakr was so soft and smelled like a waterfall. But, images of Nessa slowly faded. And my mind focused on her. That someone else. Joanne.

    "Hey Jay!" I heard that soothing seductive voice.

    "Joanne..."

    "How are you hun?"

    "I'm alright and you."

    "I'm great."

    She was so sweet. Her auburn red hair. Her light gray eyes, Her warm smile. She was fairly tall. Around 5'7 or 5'9. We hugged and walked down to the cafe. Joanne always made me laugh. I sat at a table and waited for her to come back with her lunch.

    "Jaden Mark McAdams!"

    "Vanessa Leanne Martinez!"

    I laughed when she gave me an irritated look. She couldn't help but smile. That perfect smile. She looked amazing. The way her bangs fell carelessly in her eyes no matter how many times she pushed them back. Her soft lips moving in slow motion in my mind. Wow this girl is amazing!

    "So Mr.McAdams what are you doing alone?"

    "Oh nothing just waiting for someone."

    "Oh....ummm.... Who?"

    "This girl I know named Joanne."

    Her face looked flushed. And her expression grew dark. She looked away from and stood straightening her oversized sweater. She glanced at me and smiled her sweet smile. She makes my heart skip a beat when she's jealous. Its so adorable.

    "What? You jealous Nessa?" I asked with a smirk.

    "Jealousy is not my fortae."

    "Hmm sure Martinez."

    "I'll see you later McAdams."

    With that she sashayed away swaying her hips away and back to her friends as always. The rythem in her hips had me memorized. I think Joanne noticed when she came back.

    "Girlfriend of yours?" She snarled

    "No just a friend don't worry about her. I think she's taken."

    "Ok good." She smiled

    I smiled at Joanne knowing that I should pick one or the other. They both like me and I like both of them. Joanne confessed to me a year ago and we became friends. Nessa on the other hand was never good at hiding who she liked. Whenever that person was near her hands would get sweaty her face would be cherry red and she would fumble on her words like an adorably she little girl. I didn't like where this was going. I needed to do something before it was to late.
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    Uh oh! Is Joanne getting possesive?? Is Jaden going to confess to the both of them? Will Vanessa ever cross paths with Joanne?! AHHH SUCH SUSPENSE!
     
  5. Bump! Nice update may
     
  6. Go with Vanessa
     
  7. YOU NEED TO UPDATE WUMMAN!!

    I looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooove it a lot!
     
  8. 0.0 I didnt think it was that good
     
  9. This is awesomely kwel :D
     
  10. You really got the whole teenage thing down:)
     
  11. I hope so since im a teen myself
     
  12. Sorry guys.... Im closing this story.... Im done with writing