Candyland GONE MAD!

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Flubberj (01), May 1, 2012.

  1. Oh no! WHEN GUMMY BEARS ATTACK! Lol love it!!
     
  2. Sorry the first few chapters were slow it's speeding up now
     
  3. I actually, love this. It's great!
     
  4. I tried to make it stand out against the teen love dramas in FF right now
     
  5. I hate those, even though I wrote one. Bad mistake! This story is amazing!
     
  6. They are okay but get boring
     
  7. ADD A SUPPAH VIOLENT LOVE INTEREST!
     
  8. They got boring after the 3rd one I read.
     
  9. No i said Violent not Violet 
     
  10. Should I update?
     
  11. Okay but my iPod may die on me we are going through a thunderstorm and I can't charge it
     
  12. Ahhh! This is amazing! I'm scared o gummy bears now too. 
     
  13. Long update 

    Chapter 4

    I screamed "THIS IS ALL YOUR FAULT!" The gummy bear looked stunned, so, taking advantage of the opportunity I put the gummy bear in a headlock.

    The gummy bear squirmed and threw me to the ground then drew a licorice sword. "I shall kill thee and take thee to my master, sorry I'm learning Shakespeare."

    "Shakespeare huh? I learned some of that," I said.

    "Prove it," the gummy bear responded.

    "I shall,
    Lovers and madmen have such seething brains, such shaping fantasies that apprehend more than cool reason ever comprehends. The lunatic, the lover, and the poet are of imagination all compact. One see more devils than vast hell can hold, that is, the madman; the lover, all as frantic, sees Helen's beauty in a brow of Egypt; the poet's eye, in a fine frenzy rolling, doth glance from heaven to earth, from earth to heaven; and, as imagination bodies forth the form if things unknown, the poet's pen turn them to shapes, and gives to airy nothing a local habitation and a name. Such tricks hath strong imagination, that, if it would but apprehend some joy; it comprehend some bringer of that joy; or in the night, imagining some fear, how easy is a bush suppos'd a bear!"

    "Wow," the gummy bear said as he helped me up. "I like you," he said.

    "Well, would you like to join me in my quest to get out of this place?" I asked.

    "What the heck, sure I'll do it," he said as he shook my hand. "Have a sword," he said as he tossed me a sword.

    I thought I was fine, until I turned around to find a gun in my face.

    I write these at school then come home type them in my notes and totally change them  so it's unpredictable what will happen next
     
  14. The sword was made of licorice by the way
     
  15. Yes the gummy bear likes Shakespeare and I typed the monologue from memory
     
  16. I'm not sure if I should continue it doesn't seem too popular…
     
  17. Do not stop! I was just at school! That way I couldn't comment! I love it! Don't quit!