 Deadly Sin 

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *SensualPie (01), Feb 3, 2012.

  1. that's mean!
    Imani : *kicks James in the crotch because he's too tall for her to reach his face* 
     
  2. -stops cause its HAMMER TIME!!!!!!! Goes on hammer rampage-
     
  3.  you know what I realized? THIS IS BLOOD ON THE ICE ALL OVER AGAIN! I shall not allow history to repeat itself. I'll make a discussion thread for this story later on. Please only comment for a bump/advice/answering a question I put here.
     
  4. *licks a desk* taste like hor*y girls 
     
  5. James don't steal one of mah awesome hammer lines cuz If you do I'll slaughter you with a toaster
     
  6. I do it because I care!!! xD
     
  7. Man hammer time is like me and my cousins thing when playing super smash broswe get a hammer and go stop HAMMER TIMEbbbbb
     
  8. I actually have a really funny story about that line you wanna hear it xD
     
  9. Buump!! Pedo trap! 
     
  10. Hey! What did I say?!  no chatting on my thread! Seriously guys! 
     
  11. Bump 
     
  12. "Lucky!" Jade whispered at me, sarcasm plain in her voice.
    I groaned, banging my head on the table. We were in the cafeteria, and my usual table was flooded with girls that had a million questions for me. Mr. Hall never gave detention to a girl before-they all made sure to do their homework. Although I was positive I had mine.
    "Was he mad?"
    "Did he mention me?!"
    "How's your permanent record?"
    Jade growled, and they instantly shut up, awkwardly shuffling away. I sighed in relief.
    "Thanks."
    "Sure. What're friends for?" she grinned, going back to eating an apple. I pushed my food away, not hungry at all.
    "Is detention worrying you that much?" Jade asked, arching an eyebrow. "Or who it's with?"
    I blushed, shooting her a look. "No! Not at all! What gave you that idea?!"
    "You're red as a... well, an apple." she shrugged, taking another bite of her apple.
    "..." I looked down, studying my hands. "Mr. Hall just puts me on edge. I don't like him, and I don't want to... but he's so…"
    "Attractive? Smart? Charismatic?"
    "Annoying." I huff, crossing my arms.
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    Short update.  do you think detention will be exciting? 