The Combat Butler

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *ThePurpleComet (01), Nov 28, 2012.

  1. Seriously, DETAILS! you rush through the details waaaaay too much. And seriously? Maria? :p
     
  2. Dammit I rushed through it again?! And yes Maria its a lovely Name -.-
     
  3. Way to rushed with the detail.. slow down and take your time when you right^_^
     
  4. Thanks for the advice short sister
     
  5. <_< BOY IMA FARM YOU IF YOU CALL ME SHORT AGAIN
     
  6. Oi, don't copy my critisism shorty.
     
  7. PERCYOUS! <_< I WAS AGREEING WITH YOU.., Dont call me short 
     
  8. Roger that shorty :3
     
  9. Ugh.... Percyous leave me alone
     
  10. OiMateDontCallmeSisterShort
     
  11. UPDATE4
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    Right after I passed out, I had a dream with santa in it.

    "Were you satisfied with your life?" Santa asked.

    "Huh, you make it seem like I died or something."

    "You did, you died a horrible death. Your **** was smashed and your lungs were punctured."

    I stood there with my mouth wide open until I said, "If I died so be it, at least I ended on a good note."

    "You attempted kidnapping and failed that is still a crime! Now I must go, this dream is too poor looking I will never return here."

    I woke up in a comfy bed, in a large nicely decorated room. I thought that this was heaven, I searched everywhere in this place which I found out was a mansion. I kept looking and found one of those japenese-style baths. So I got in and the water was perfect, but I wasn't the only one in there.
     
  12. Much betta!
     
  13. YeaMeFinallySlowedDown
     
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