•~Unthinkable~•

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by _Xx-Heavenly-xX_, Aug 31, 2013.

  1. ~Chapter Three~

    My brother stood there; his arms widen open. He didn't even have to ask, I ran full speed straight towards him. His muscular arms wrapped around me. he picked me up and spinned me around.

    "Hey sis! Miss me?" He grinned an All-American-White-Teeth-Boy smile.

    I laughed at him, "of course I did; who wouldn't miss their favorite brother?!" I said with a smirk spread across my face.

    His eyes danced over my shoulder, I turned to see what he was staring at.

    My mother stood there staring at him; Her eyes watered up, but I could see she was trying to keep it together so hard.

    "Daniel Matthew Cattaway..." My mom whispered under her breathe.

    He let go of me, and swiftly walked over to my mom and hugged her. She held on to him as if she was afraid to lose him.

    "Hey mom. I missed you. Sorry I wish I could have seen you sooner, I heard you were moving out here as I decided to drop by and say hey to the family!"

    Daniel was always good as making someone smile even on the worse of days.

    ******

    "Daniel when is that last time you had cut your hair?" My mom started to nag him; as she rustled his shaggy dirty blonde hair.

    "The girls dig it!" A wicked gleam appeared in his eyes, which vanished after mom slapped him playfully.

    "Daniel Matthew Cattaway, you better keep those pants pulled up high!" She continued to nag, and I continues to laugh at them.

    ******

    The movers finally came after a few minutes and they started to move everything inside.

    I wondered around the house, looking in each room. This house would have been prefect for my dad. I sighed as I stared out the window, at the lake.

    There was a small, old fashion looking shed in the back. I eyed it; the door was rusted, the window panel were crooked, and one was leaning against the shed wall, and the pale blue paint was peeling off.

    "Whatcha looking at kiddo?" A familiar muscular arm draped over my small figure.

    I shrugged as I gazed up at my brother.

    "How's it feel to be a senior?" Daniel elbowed my rib cage, as he smirked.

    "It's okay I guess. I mean it's basically the middle of the school year and I'm starting a new school." I shrugged off the subject. My first day of school was tomorrow.

    I glanced down at my watch. 12:09pm.

    "Ima take you out!" Daniel grabbed my arm, dragging me out of the room.

    Oh great.

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     I hope you enjoy.  If you would like I can try to fine pictures that describe what the characters look like. Haha

    Comment!!! if you don't. Ima come after you.
     
  2. The brother sounds hottttttt.
     
  3.  Lets see if you think that in the next update.
     
  4. NO DONT KILL HIS AWESOMENESS
     
  5. Lol.

    Wonder what kinda story this will turn out to be xD *eagerly waiting*
     
  6. Hmmm. Interesting. Curious as to where this will go. My having a liking for incest stories, I'd love for it to go in that direction.
     
  7. ^^^^ haha that's to funny!
     
  8. I meant that for royale's comment but yours works too.
     
  9. that would be interesting
     
  10. ~Chapter Four~

    "This would look so cute!" Daniel squealed in a high-pictched voice; making him sound like a little 5-year-old screaming for Justin Beiber. Man did I hate that kid.

    "I'm not really a dress type of person though.." I said as I eyed the short, totally not dress code appropriate dress.

    "Aww!" He sighed hanging it back up, and looked though the racks of clothes.

    I followed behind him, looking around.

    "No! Ew that's totally ugly!" Another high-pitched voice screamed; this time it wasnt my brother. I looked of a rack, and saw what looked like a walking talking Barbie doll. I mean if you saw her you would think the same think.

    For one thing, she was totally wearing colored contacts, and she looked like a giant pink bubble gum. Her dress as all puffy and pink, and pink pumps and her lips were masked with pink lipstick.

    "Ava! Look at this." Daniel comes over with a black pencil skirt, and a zebra printed crop top. I looked at it. It didn't look bad, however Im not one for skirts either.

    "Just try it on please!" Daniel pleaded, when I started to shake my head.

    After at least 10 minutes I gave in and said fine.

    *******

    He bought me at least ten outfits and six pairs of shoes.

    I asked him after he was done paying if we could go home.

    That was a big fat No.

    He took me to get my hair done, and them my nails, and he actually had them wax me down.

    "Can we just get something to eat.. My legs are killing me." I sighed as I plopped down on the bench.

    *****

    We sat in a booth, as he devoured an order of 20 chicken wings. I ate a Bacon burger.

    That burger was delicious. It was to dye for.

    "So how are you copping with... Him.." Daniel said quietly. I knew what he meant when he said Him..

    I closed my eyes, and whole my head.

    Not the Water works..

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    Sorry it might seem really boring now.? It's gonna get better i swear!

    COMMENT! [/b]
     
  11. It's great. Again some simply grammatical/spelling errors...

    To die for.*
    Think the same thing.*
     
  12. Simple*darn my autocorrect.
     
  13. ? Sorry I was proofread this morning. sorta half asleep
     
  14. Nice bb coding at the end.  And yeah like Brooke said, some spelling errors.
     
  15.  interesting....╰( ̄▽ ̄)╭