~•~ Our Little Secret ~•~

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by KeelyCole, Jun 8, 2014.

  1. WALL ME WHEN UPDATED! I LOVE THIS STORY!

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  2. Wall me when you update plz
     
  3. Wall me when updated pleeease :D
     
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    Our Little Secret
    Chapter 10
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    -Her POV-

    I walked into the bathroom, and got my shower. When, I finished drying off, I went into my room, put on a little sundress, and left for the kitchen.

    "Hi guys." I say smiling, walking down the staircase.

    "Woah..." Hayden muttered.

    My mom started giggling.

    "You look very nice sweetie. Going somewhere?" she asked.

    "I hope." I said looking at Hayden.

    "Um, picnic?"

    "On the beach?" I asked.

    "Anything for you. We'll just have to stop by Logan's first. You and Kelsey can chat. I'm pretty sure she's still there." he laughed a little.

    "Alright. Well, can I mom?" I asked.

    "Have fun. Nice meeting you Hayden." she said softly, smiling at him.

    "And you as well ma'am."

    With that we left.

    -His POV-

    Me and Keely's mother had a wonderful conversation. We talked all about her childhood, and what she said she wanted to be later in life.

    We talked about her mother, herself as well. She had been working, until she had Keely, then until she was five. Now, she does small jobs like babysits, crafts, things of the sort. She said she quit because she always wanted to be with Keely.

    Never once throughout our whole conversation did a father ever once pop into the conversation. I'm curious as of to why. There was to be one, otherwise, how would Keely even be here?

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  5. yay ty for updating let me know when u update
     
  6. Yay! update
     
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    Our Little Secret
    Chapter 11
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    -Her POV-

    We got in Hayden's truck and left my house, headed for Logan's.

    "So, you just chose to move in with Logan?" I asked.

    "Yeah. Kinda like living alone sometimes..."

    "Is it different? Living alone I mean."

    "Depends. If you were raised alone, it isn't any different." he said quietly.

    We stopped at Logan's house, and Hayden changed, while I talked to Kelsay, borrowing a bikini in the process.

    Hayden picked up a basket, a blanket, and we left for the nearest store. Hayden went in buying different things, always making sure to get what I like.

    I liked how he cared. He wanted me to be happy, not just himself. Maybe it's what I loved most about him.

    -His POV-

    I went in alone. I needed time to think. I wanted the rest of the day to be perfect. I think I'm going to tell her. Because I do.

    'I love her...'

    'I need her...'

    'She's like my other half...'

    "I'm telling her." I finally managed to say aloud to myself.

    I got back in the car and we headed towards the beach.

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    CONTEST WINNERS!:
    Male Character : Tarlock Ruthford
    Creator/Winner : TROUBLEGIRL

    Female Character : Brittany Georges
    Creator/Winner : Dictation

    I will be adding these two character within the next few chapters. I have contacted the winners, and will be giving my readers more details as soon as I possibly can!

    Congratulations TROUBLEGIRL, and Dictation!
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  9. Ooooh, wall me when updated again?
     
  10. Tell when update 
     
  11. BUMP!!! please wall me when updated, I love this story
     
  12. Amazing story! Bump!!! :-D Update, UPdate UPDATE!!!
    Wall me when updated!! :)
     
  13. Amazing story! Bump!!! :-D Update, UPdate UPDATE!!!
    Wall me when updated!! :)
     
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    Our Little Secret
    Chapter 12
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    -His POV-

    I had finally managed to make up my mind to tell Keely that I love her. I don't know how, but I will tell her tonight. I have to tell her.

    We arrived at the beach shortly later. She looked beautiful, it seemed more than ever. It seemed like the perfect moment to tell her, only I couldn't find the right words.

    I grabbed her hand, and gently squeezed it.

    "Keely..."

    "Yes?", she said smiling.

    Her smile, with those eyes. It made her seem to shine.

    "I... I, um."

    Suddenly the temperature was boiling.

    "Hayden, are you okay?", she asked moving closer to me.

    "Yeah. I'm fine. Ready to go?" I asked.

    "Yeah, but weren't you going to say something?", Keely asked climbing down out of the truck.

    "Oh, it was nothing." I say, as I go around the truck and grab her hand.

    'Idiot.' I thought to myself, as we walked off towards the beach.

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    -Her POV-

    We walked towards the beach and all I could think about is what he was going to tell me. We found a spot on the beach and set up everything for the picnic. I managed to knock things over, and trip over my own two feet.

    Hayden rushed over to help me up.

    "Are you okay? You seem distracted."

    "I am. All I can think about is what you were going to tell me in the car." I admitted.

    "Keely..."

    "It's fine. If you don't want to tell me, you don't have to. I understand." I said quietly, looking down.

    "But the thing is I have to. I'd never forgive myself if I didn't tell you.", he said, placing his finger under my chin and gently lifts my head.

    He gently kisses me, and looks into my eyes.

    "I love you, Keely."

    "Y-you love me?" I repeat.

    "I do. I love you, Keely. I'll say it as many times as I need to."

    "I love you too, Hayden."
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    Hello fellow readers. ️ I'm here to apologize about my lack of writing, seeing as the last update was in October of last year. Yell at me if you must, or be disappointed. Many things had happened at the end of last year. Birthdays, trips/vacations, celebrating my actual relationship, holidays, and much more. But now that is no longer an excuse. Hopefully you all will continue reading, and if not I will just write for fun. Anyways, if I have any readers left I hope you enjoy this chapter, and I should be updating around the same time tomorrow if anyone is interested.
    With Love,
    Keely
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    Our Little Secret
    Chapter 13
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    -Her POV-

    "I love you Keely.", Hayden told me quietly.

    "I-I... I love you too, Hayden."

    He smiled at me, and kissed me gently.

    "You do?", he asked, as if he hadn't heard what I'd just say.

    "I do... I really do." I smiled at him.

    One of the best things about us is that no one would have ever thought that we would end up in love. It's one of those relationships that no one thinks will last, but you prove them wrong. One of those relationships where all the flaws just fit together to become a perfectly tangled mess.

    But the only problem was, we didn't know the mess we had slowly been creating.

    -His POV-

    She told me she loved me too. My heart raced with excitement I hadn't felt in years. My chest felt as if I could explode. It was a strange but pleasant feeling. I don't think I've ever felt this way about anyone.

    I love her...

    I will always love her...

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    Hey readers.  Well, if I have any anymore. Anyways, it has come to my attention that only one person stayed with me, and one new reader. I love writing, but not for an empty crowd. I hate to do this, but if I don't have a few more readers excited about my story, I might end it completely. I haven't made up my mind yet, but it's a possibility. Anyways, if you are a new reader or old and want to updated about updates, follow me, or post to my wall. It's easier to know who would like to be updated and who wouldn't.
    Until Next Time,
    Keely
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  16. Please continue!!