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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by _Xx-Heavenly-xX_, Sep 21, 2013.

  1.  haha Sammi.
     
  2. Notice how it's not Monday yet? That's because YOLO or maybe we're all secretly Australian.
     
  3. I caught it as it started slipping to the second page
     
  4. ~Chapter Four~
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    I ran through the village. People stared at me as if I was some psycho. Sweat glistened across my forehead.

    I was on my own.

    My silk dress was torn at the trimming, now it was just above my knees. My hair was messy around my face, and I probably smelt like death.

    I finally reached the forest. I caught my breathe a little. My feet were aching, and my knees were cut up.

    I had to keep going though. I stumbled through the forest, tripping over logs and bricks.

    Inflicting more cuts on me.

    That's when I heard it.

    A horse.

    "Jasmine!" A familiar voice yelled.

    My eyes widen. How'd he find me?!

    I started running again. I guess Erik'd heard my foot steps Because his horse
    trotted in my direction.

    "Jasmine! Please stop!" He was closer to me now.

    I wasn't going to stop, buy I sorta had not choice once I tripped over a over grown root. I face planted.

    "Jasmine!" Erik jumped off his white beauty and ran to me.

    My eyes slowly closed. I was fighting myself. But I was to weak.

    The darkness swallowed me whole.

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    Erik to the rescue! 
     Next chapter will be introducing some new characters. ?Don't ask about the names.

     Go white beauty! Haha.
     
  5. Awe 
    I think Erik's nice enough 
     
  6. Nooo :eek: and yeah I think he's a little misunderstood prince
     
  7. Bumping for dead guy <3
     
  8.  Sammi


    Priceless!!
     
  9. ~Chapter Five~
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    ~ Prince Erik's Point of View~


    I carried her in my arms, Pearl trotted behind me.

    I hope she's okay.

    I let out a deep sigh.

    "Get off my land!" A deep voice said.

    I looked around, not exactly knowing where the voice is coming from.

    "It is I. Prince Erik. I need help I-"

    "Help? Haha Prince Erik wouldn't waste his time in here." A puny old man popped in to sight.

    The man was no more then five feet tall. He wobbled over to us.

    "Do my eyes deceive me? Is that really the Prince?!" The man plastered a fake smile on.

    "She is.. Um hurt.." I hold her tightly.

    "Come." He wobbled in the complete opposite direction.

    ******

    I watched as Gretchen, the old mans wife, cleaned Jasmine's cuts up.

    "Henry! Get Landon for me please." She called at her husband.

    "She'll be fine. Do not worry." She smiled kindly at me, and I sent a friendly smile back to her.

    The house was small, and had some broken things that could use repairing.

    "Thank you for helping me. When I go back home I will send a gift expressing my thank you." I brushed jasmine's cheek lightly.

    "Oh no dearly! It's quite alright." She said; as she pressed a damp cloth to jasmine's forehead.

    ******

    We moved Jasmine to the spare bedroom. I insisted I help cook dinner. Gretchen smiled and shrugged.

    Henry hasn't come back with Landon yet.

    "Ah it's okay. Those two tend to take their time coming home." Gretchen said after we finished cooking.

    We both laugh a bit. Then it goes silent.

    Jasmine stood there eyeing us both.

    "Oh darling I'm glad your well." Gretchen rushed over to Jasmine and sat her on the couch.

    "Yes, thank you very much. I appreciate everything you have done for me." Jasmine smiled at her, and they started to talk girl.

    I zoned out, not listening to their girl talk. I stared out the window.

    It felt as if something, or someone was staring at me. I squinted a little to see if there was anything there.

    "We're home!" Henry walked in, following but someone shaggy headed blondie.

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     I love that last part. Haha.

    Enjoy! 
     
  10. OOH SHE'S GONNA FLIRT WITH ERIK AND JASMINE'S GONNA GET JEALOUS

    Unless this "shaggy haired blonde" is a guy. Actually no I predict it'll still happen even if it's a guy.

    Erik is just too much of man-candy to pass up. The dead guy is even more so. Man, that's a hawt piece off ass right there. I think this fangirling has gotten too extreme…
     
  11.  oh Lordy Sammi!
     
  12. Yes, I am your Lordy. WORSHIP ME!!!
     
  13.  Sorry guys you'll have to wait til I get home to read my update. I somehow deleted it while was was going through all my notes. Haha I had to make space.