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Jack: they're making a huge mistake -rolls eyes-
(your evil) Jack: hard enough surviving, let alone take care of someone else
Jack: -walks up to Mickey- that makes you sick to? -rolls eyes-
Jack: come on Lily, its just young love -sighs romantically and laughs-
Jack: some new kid, has ties to Blake I think
Jack: -turns to lily- Little Jess has herself a crush
Jack: -chuckles-
Jack: -smiles- that's something your mommy should tell you about
Jack: -grins- does Jessie have herself a little boyfriend?
Jack: -puts Jessie on shoulders- how are you?
Jack: -holds her up- hey there little Jess -smiles-
Jack: -sees Jessie and smiles-
Yeah. Different font color please
Jack: -looks around- what to do
Jack: -trips-
Jack: -walks outside-
Jack: -sitting in cafeteria-
Looking forward to chapter two
Really good, I like it a lot
(we will need A Good Guy (Heroic and Trustworthy) A Good Girl (Girlfriend and Happy) A Bad Guy (Evil, Insane) A Bad Girl (SUPER flirty, can't...