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Jack: hey! You owe me a gun you freeloader!
Jack: -smiles- same
Jack: -keeps shooting sails-
Jack: -thinks for a second and says- Jack
Jack: my real name? -laughs-
Jack: -points blunderbuss at other ship- you break ours, we break your's -shoots the sails-
Jack: -nods- cool, sounds fun
Jack: just walking around, and yourself,
Jack: I'm going to stay here, I have had enough adventure for one day
Jack: -laughs- relax, I'm not going to kill you, yet -winks and laughs-
Jack: -walks up to her- good to see you again
Jack: Renee! Are you alive!?!
Jack: -listens to her hum-
(Jack's in the crows nest )
Jack: want me to do something?!?
Jack: -grins-
Jack: -winks at captain and walks into crowd-
Jack: he's boarding our ship!
Other then that great story