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Jack: cause I can be
(uh... It's gone)
Jack: -chuckles as he throws his hands out, the ghost violently evaporating into nothing-
Jack: Dead, put her back on the tree
Jack: once you stop being an ***. My name is Jack, I'm a fallen. Got it?
(I just want some simple details and she is evolving it into something huge.) Jack: I'll make him drop you and crush your mindless little skull
Jack: what's the matter? Helpless to angel? Dead, hang her in mid air from the legs -laughs as the ghost dangles her- (Is that god-modding? If...
(grow a pair, I gave you one piece of advice and you go all "oh poor me")
Jack: yup, I can do this -snaps fingers as a ghost appears- dead, pull her hair -chuckles as the ghost obeys-
(realistic isn't saying "swims out, finds a shark, sucks it's blood.")
Jack: I'm not an angel! -- I'm a fallen
Jack: hmm... -looks her up and down- pale skin, bags under your eyes from insomnia, razor sharp fangs. Ethier your just a mess or a vampire......
Jack: -flies up and sits next to Jess- whatcha drawing? (and please do keep it pg, it kinda started like the beginning of a bad *orno. "Oh, my...
(brb)
Jack: -slowly backs up- dumb bat
Jack: -lands on the ground and looks up at the trees, spotting Jess- oh what the ****...
Jack: -flies to window and rest foot on bookshelf, hoisting his way up to the window-
Jack: time to leave undetected!
Jack: -slowly empties blood containers- drink that you bloodsuckers
(I'll get him to speak with you when he comes on)