Separate names with a comma.
All you'd see was an unmowed backyard for me
Jack: sure
Jack: perfect
Jack: I'm done with this one
Jack: I'm done
Jack: my reasons
Jack: no, you have her
Jack: you ran
Jack: well... I already got what I needed for her... Keep her... As a thank you
Jack: -laughing at Des- good one
not like that. Plot wise, add more to it. Describe stuff like the overall relationships of the family. If people I like join then so will I
Hmm.. Expand on it more... It's interesting but add more to it
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Jack: I need her stable
Jack: my test subject
Jack: -walks outside- hey des
(your on my block list) Jack: -sighs-
(can't talk to you in pm)
(long story)
(looks like I have to find another subject)