Separate names with a comma.
(hey everyone! Alex is home! :D) Jack: hostile, what is a cute good boy like you doing with such language coming out of your mouth?
(have fun outside Alex, when you feel like shooting lightning at the portal (which will do nothing hence he name "seeing" not "travel") come back...
Jack: -eating a donut, leaning back in his chair- just wanted to fill you guys in on what I'm doing
I imagine it is if the grammar was correct and I could actually read it.
Jack: -opens a speaking portal on the houses wall, starring at the heroes- hey *** faces
Jack: -laughs at Jace and speaks into his hands, saying "I'm an idiot, repeat that" and clapping. The thunder saying just that-
Jack: and... Clap -claps and load thunder roars above the heroes-
Jack: well, at least the suck with them. I'll rain on their parade... -stands and flicks finger in viewing portal, causing it to rain above the house-
Jack: -watching the heroes- oh goody goody. The idiots got powers
Lollipop for that
Jack: I found this... -kicks him a piece of paper with a small warning saying "Beware the thing, it haunts the park"-
Jack: I was here to enjoy a day, and myself
Jack: knock it off
Jack:
Jack: holy ****!
And when I ask them to move a bit they get all up in my face and yell "IM SICK"
Jack: -nervous- uh.... Nah
Jack: -rolls eyes- well that's pathetic. Can I go now?
Do it when you are well rested and at top writing performance.
Then why write when you haven't slept if you knew it'd be poorly proof-read?