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Jack: hmm... Well maybe you all that blood went to your big mosquito bite of a head
Jack: this is awful -whispers to Ryan- her family died
Jack: -shocked- what did I do!?!
Jack: your really mad at him -laughs-
Jack: well, your asking him to war which pretty much translates too...
Jack: are you... -smirks- Sayuli got a crush
Jack: at least he can read unlike you
Jack: -rolls eyes, adjusting his arm-
Jack: gah! -sits up- never do that again
Jack: -mumbles- like hell you will
Jack: -tries to yank his arm out- oh no, I'm not letting you do some freaky voodoo **** on me
Jack: oh nothing, just my arm has 3rd degree burns
Jack: -angrily stomping around-
Jack: -touches the burn- gah...
Do you like what your writing?
Jack: grr... Where'd she go
Jack: gah! -rolls and feels the heat burn his arm- get back here! -chases after her-
See, your writing for fans. Write for yourself
Jack: relax girl
Jack: like hell I'm standing and being an easy target!