Separate names with a comma.
Jack: -shrugs- okay, come on -starts to walk-
Jack: unfortunately no
Jack: sounds fun -walks with her-
Lowercase "A" in are
Jack: -follows her- where you going?
*I'm
All caps rage
(theif much?) Jack: -looks at Jess- ugh it's that weird girl again
How can't you spell ok? It's two letters! O and K
Jack: -stops and picks up his board, holding it under his arm-
ment? What's that mean. It looks like the word "meant" but isn't spelled the same...
I don't see what spikey's name has to do with blue cheese but okay
Jack: -listens to all the sound- ah, the refreshing sounds of idiots
Yeah, kid who can't spell
Ok PillyLad
Jack: -boards down a hill, toward the school-
Jack: -longboarding, looking around-
You forgot the rest of the "____"s
Jack: exactly -goes back to playing-
Jack: -glares at Jess- and I suppose you can do something better?