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It's good but one thing you hold put " " these I front of when people are speaking and at the end but other than that I think it's pretty good so far
your just gonna let this diedid Jason die at the beginning thing you wrote and why how what is going on
Yea I think you should. You didn't really put enough for people to know whether you should so you should write more so people will know whether or...
I love it
Why you going to quit writing it??
Omg!!! I never reading that book who else died??
Not learn cause you already know how to bump just... Ok imma gonna stop explaining my self cause it can go on forever I just you should bump again...
Misspelled a wordI meant you should bump a lot.
bump
I think I spelled it wrong
This is an awesome calabo. Bump
Lol this story is excellent bump
Oh that is in excellent twist that Samantha be Helen and Julia be elizabeth... bump!
It's still good and so what of typos we can figure out what they mean I love this story bump! I wanna learn more about how she becam a crazy...
I was great but too long jeez lo maybe I thought it was to long cause it's like 2 in the morningbut bump I want to know what happens to him
Omg this story I swear is making me cry at some parts and laug at some parts. It's an awesome story and hi I'm a new readerplease update soon
It was good but like he said don't rush it it's good to have more words to take your time with the climax and plotbut other than that it's really...
I like this story I think after your done writing the other one ou should come bak to this one and write more to it also could you wall me your...