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And thnx lol I have a big imagination
Lol your welcome for helping you
Charlie:-starts writing about butterflies-
Greatbump
Charlie:-and asking for paper since I used that one to ask her what she's writing about-
Charlie:-passes a note to Isabella asking what is she writing about-
I love it like I loved your other updatesI admit it's easier to read but it's still the same story and still really interestingbump
Charlie:-sits in the far back corner of the classroom humming to herself-
Omg the secretary Bump
(I wouldn't know what to do if I was a teacher)
Charlie:-walks into room-
Charlie: I so late (hey can I share a dorm with anyone?)
Charlie:-looks at what room dorm I'm in-
Then you should keep going. if you don't like criticism then just don't read their criticism, I like that your writing for fun
Charlie:don't worry you will find it
Charlie:hhmm I think I should try to find my dorm to. Is there any guys here?
Don't give up I love it. And other people love it too just take other peoples advise and you can chose whether or not you want to listen to it or...
Charlie
Carlie: so vicious
Charlie:-startled didn't really see Maria either- Hey guys I'll be back I an hour it's over 103 degrees at my house I gonna go swimming bye