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Forgot house. Grifindor
So I was looking at the HP next generation thing and saw that you guys want to bring it back. I thought that was a pretty good idea. So here's one...
Tarragon: rolls eyes. Looks around for the necklace. "Where'd it go?"
Tarragon: looks at it. "Thanks." Turns to Ryan. "What problem?"
Tarragon: Grimaces and clenches jaw to keep from crying out.
Tarragon: nods. "The kidnapped me then etched their symbol into my arm. They said that I was one I ten now."
(Bump)
Really cool.
Can I vote for myself?
Sorry it was short. Writer's block today.
Disagree with 6.
I closed my eyes and shook my head. Something didn't seem right. For one, why would they be working together? And two, the whole team should be...
Just wait it out and hope for them best. Thsts what I'm doing.
For all you dedicated readers, I'm going to update in the next 24 hours or so.
Tarragon: steps into the room. "Huh." Looks around.
Tarragon: "More secrets?" Looks down the passage way.
Wow, love it. Few comments though: grammar and keep your tense. Either be in the past or present tense. Really interesting.
Tarragon: feels hood slipping and pulls it up more. Looks around. "I've never seen so many books."
Tarragon: watches. "Where does this lead?"
Border Hopper. Thought that one was the best!