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Nick: tells his gang to go somewhere. Grabs Elizabeth's shoulder. "Sorry about that. It was all for show really. Didn't mean to offend you."...
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Emmalyn: walks to the cafe downtown. Nick: him and his gang wall around town looking for more targets.
Nick: shouts. "Maybe some other time. When your friend isn't around to hold you back." Walks away with his gang laughing.
Nick: "Count on it." Smiles evilly and walks away with his gang. Emmalyn: sighs in relief.
James: laughs. "Here that guys? He needs his girlfriend to save him."
Nick: sneaks away while they're distracted. Emma: continues walking toward the shouting.
(Scratch the Emmalyn part.) Emmalyn: "Hey." Watches the group.
Nick: "I you're looking for a fight, you just got one." Rolls up sleeves. Emmalyn: "Oh no." Walks slowly to the group.
Nick: shrugs. "Survival of the fittest. Ever heard of it?" Emmalyn: sighs. "Wish I could do something."
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Nick: watches as the guards run by him.
Emmalyn: sees the gang. "Not again." Nick: "And who are you to stop me? I have a gang." The member releases the kid and he runs off.
Nick: jumps down into a small valley. Hides under a downed tree. Emma: hears shouting. Stands up.
Emmalyn: "Oh. I'll see later." Walks off. Nick: raises an eyebrow. "Well?" Kid: whispers. "No." Nick: "What do you have?" The gang laughs. One...
Nick: hears footsteps behind him. Laughs and runs faster.
Emmalyn: "When are auditions? And what play is it?" Nick: "Hey kid!" Kid: "Yyyeah?" Stammers. Nick: "You got any money?" Kid: "Um.."
Emmalyn: eyes widen. "Really? Where? I want to audition." James: "Hey, look at that kid over there." Points to a freshman. The gang laughs. "Why...
Emmalyn: turns to him. "So what are you going to do?" Nick: hangs out with his gang.