Separate names with a comma.
No spaces, by the way. You had it right, though.
I like it, but more descriptive would be nice. Also, be sure to use a different paragraph for each dialogue. Bit other than that, it's great!...
I thought I was your forum friend..... It's nice to be noticed.
Thank you, B. I'm not the most fashionable.
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Black hoodie, black t with "Vampires Suck" in red lettering. Faded jeans.
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(No I wasn't. I don't want my character to die.) Tarragon: passes out.
Tarragon: looks around for the knife. Can't find it. "I'm not sure." Vision starts to darken.
[img] I noticed when it stopped breathing. But I do have a couple of pets. Wags -- 6 Black lab red heeler mix. Maggie -- 14 Calico
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That's means touch. I took fencing. I read the Highwayman in 7th grade. Phantom. Angel of Music.
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It's one of my favorites. That and The Raven and Ghost. Phantom. Angel of Music.
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PART ONE I THE wind was a torrent of darkness among the gusty trees, The moon was a ghostly galleon tossed upon cloudy seas, The road was a...
Tarragon: grimaces and moans. "I don't know if I have that long..."
Tarragon: whispers through clenched teeth. "Is....he dead?"
Is it really fun to waste your money away on a game that you barely even go on? And you'll soon forget about once the brand new version has come...
The Highwayman THE wind was a torrent of darkness among the gusty trees, The moon was a ghostly galleon tossed upon cloudy seas, The road was a...