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*bump
Great Job first person that's not me to numb gets a chick
Lana: I was tired *layla and Lexy jump out the window* Lana, Lexy, and Layla: LOOK OUT ZOMBIES THERES 3 OF US!!!!!!!!!!
Lana: *jumps out the window and starts killing zombies* sorry I'm late I took a nap
(fire is a wonderful thing)
Lexy: *yells to Derek as he is getting devoured* SERVES YOU RIGHT BITCH!!!!!!!!!!
(I had the idea to torch him from when I made him)
*the zombie turns to ashes* Drake: take that bitch (you were saying?)
*flame the ZL from the other side so he is trapped then Lexy throws Derek into the hoard of zombies*
*aims my flamethrower* if you torch the safe house I will ****ing kill you
*rolls my eyes just make sure you don't hit the safe house when you torch him*
*punches ZL in the face and runs outside* (body language lol)
(ROFLMFAO)
I know I was just saying keep that in mind
(because safe houses are expensive lol)
Drake: Beth go *takes out 2 flamethrowers and tosses one to Zack* GET THAT BITCH OUTSIDE I DON'T WANT TO BURN DOWN THE SAFE HOUSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Dang tough criticism but keep in mind she is a new author
ZL: *shoves you aside and picks up garret* kill him Beth: *runs out yanks Garret away and starts kicking him ass* ZACK TAKE GARRET AND RUN I'VE...
ZL: *shoots several bones out of his mouth killing many men* Drake: WTF!!!!!! YOUR KILLING SURVIVORS!!!!!! Garret: hi! *says to the ZL*
(you need to get everybody outside to fight the zombies)