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Hope: stuff this... -Makes myself shine like a light blinding the merpeople- Merpeople: -Swims away- Hope: -Smiles and swims through some...
Commentator: HOPE GRYFFINDOR IS FIGHTING HER WAY THROUGH A GROUP OF MERPEOPLE!
Hope: -Swims Into a group of Merpeople- Awww crap! Merpeople: -Attack Hope- Hope: Stupify! Petrificous totalous! Sectumsempra! -Throws spells at...
(Okay.)
Hope: Stupify! Merperson: -Stunned- Hope: -Swims quickly away-
Merperson: -Grabs Hope- Commentator: AND HOPE GRYFFINDOR IS BEING ATTACKED BY MERPEOPLE!
Hope: -Swims through seaweed and sees sudden movement I draw my wand-
Hope: I am. My moms down there... McGonagal: ON THE SOUND OF THE CANON YOU MAY BEGIN! -Canon sounds- Hope: -Swallows Gillyweed and dives in-
Hope: -Smiles and catches it- McGonagal: GRYFFINDOR AND SLYTHERIN YOU ARE COMPETEING FIRST TO THE STANDS! Hope: -Takes a breath and walks onto...
(RULE CHANGE: Sam and Hope will compete against eachother to find their Person. First one to get them and resurface wins. This is NOT an easy...
Hope: Thank you dear. -Kisses Toms cheek- McGonagal: Miss Gryffindor, your first here! brilliant! -Takes Hopes arm dragging her away- Hope:...
(*John)
Hope: Thanks Draco...
Hope: -apperates to the lake where the crowds are gathering- Gryffindor: ITS HOPE! Gryffindors: HOPE!!!! HOPE!!!! -chants Hopes name- Hope:...
(Josh are you talking to us?) Hope: -Puts Roses locket around my neck then holds hand out to Tom- You coming sweetie?
Hope: She should be here by now... -Bites lip anxiously and looks at Tom- I think I've just found out who I'm saving...
Hope: -Glances at the clock- Come on Mom where are you...
(Why not just say brackets?! )
(Huh?) Hope: -Pulls Roses locket out of my drawer-
Hope: -Sings softly under my breath-