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Kris: You tell me... What do you remember?
(Sure, I think so ) Kris: *Sits on a chair on the deck alone*
Kris: Hope, you're awake!
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(Lol Katie, join in!)
Have you read my story yet?
Kris: *Walks out to the deck* I really love the sea...
Kris: Good to hear... Draco, Elf?
Awesome, I'm looking forward to it!
Great story, but I'd very much like a bit more descriptions of the main characters and environment. Apart from that, this has been done...
Kris: *Flies into the HW* No trace of Hope's attacker... How are you three?
(Me too!)
Kris: Yes, nice to meet you all. *Smiles and begins eating*
(Hai :3 )
(SAMMMMMMIEEEEEEE!)
Kris: *Sits next to Katie and Dan, as that's the only available seat left* Oh, I saw you two on deck earlier! *Eyes widen slightly, but he offers...
(Don't I know it...)
Kris: *Goes to get himself a burger and fries*
(Awww, poor Kira! )
(What's up?)