Separate names with a comma.
(Sammi is mean, but not evil. And Angela is nice… They switched personalities!!!! Well, not really. Angela's still sorta mean)
Bump!!!
(Aw poor Night… Kira will fix his little boo-boo)
(Don't worry, Kira will try to make Night all better)
(You say what element, what age, btw most of us are around 20 because we time skipped, personality, looks, weapons and all that fun stuff. Now...
(Lol nice)
Try to make it a lot longer…?
(okay)
(Couldn't find a good pic. Sammi: 20 Angela: 20 Kira: 22 Scarlette: 18)
Scarlette: [img]
Kira: [img]
Angela: [img]
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Sammi (she's meaner now and not as friendly… maybe slightly evil>:D)
(Okay I'll find new pics)
(Actually I don't know if I want my characters to change or not… I'll decide later)
Some are fun, and I think one or two is fine, but not the first two pages.
(Okay. Luke dies too… I don't like him.)
Since she's his sister, she means more to him… I think…
I think Angel.…?