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Kira: -leans on Zelos, smiling-
Kira: Maybe… -smiles-
Kira: But if I do find the right guy, then… -sighs-
Kira: I'm sure I want to, too, deep down, but I'm trying to lie to myself. You get hurt too much trying to find the perfect one.
Kira: Me too…
Oh my gosh this is sooooooo good:D
All Americans are odd… :lol:
Kira: -smiles back- Good idea. And you know, it's not the concept of love that I hate. It's just the fact that you will get your heart broken,...
You shouldn't say stuff to get the reader's attention, because that makes you sound conceited.
I kind of agree with goldialocks. I like your story, but you should keep writing if you want to write and don't if you don't. Even though I barely...
Kira: Yeah… I hope I don't fall in love again.
True…
Kira: -sighs- I hate love. It's impossible to go against it.
Angela: Why?
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO...
Angela: Amanda… I'll be your friend.
Angela: -hears- Amanda, I don't ignore people anymore.
Kira: -opens her eyes- I would… try to fight them as best as I could. But if I couldn't, then I would just have to accept it. -sighs- What would...
Kira: -meditates-
…American!!!!