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Violette: …Mommy? -looks up from stream where she was practicing- Where awe you?
Angela: Where is everyone? -frantically looks around-
This is really good. A few typos, but a great beginning and an interesting plot starting to form.
Angela: -runs around trying to find Sammi, Scarlette, Kira and Kane-
Scarlette: -struggles- LET ME GO!! -reaches for sword-
Angela: -hears screaming- What was that…?
Sammi and Kira: -get knocked out by one of Victor's henchmen-
Sammi and Kira: -hear scream- That sounded like Scarlette… -run towards it-
Scarlette: AAAH!! Let me go!!
Angela: I uh… have to go. -walks away- (All of my characters are alone now)
Angela: -kisses back- It's fine…
Angela: It's fine, I should've seen that you were training… I'm sorry, I'm just on edge lately.
Angela: -in one of the trees he cut down- Excuse me???
Sammi: Good job! Pretty soon, you'll be as good as I am!! (NOT) Violette: -giggles- Yeah!!
(Aw poor Charlie)
Sammi: -gives Violette a nonharmful sword and takes out her own- Okay, I want you to do what I do. Thrust, thrust, swipe! Violette: -copies-
Scarlette: -training- Angela: -sitting in a tree- Kira: -walking around the forest-
Toxic, I didn't know you were such a good writer!!!! Do you want to do a collaboration some time?
Sammi: -walks around with Violette-
(I'm back early )