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(Omgomgomgomg!)
(We're Gleeks...)
(Lol, I'll get Holly Holiday to help out )
(I know... I'LL GET MERCEDES OUT ON YOUR A$$! Or Kurt... I bust the windows out ya car.... )
Yup
(Is anyone gonna help Alcheon? )
(Oh God, Santana's here.... We're all screwed... NOBODY PISS HER OFF!!! )
Bullcrap
Shadow: *Looks for anyone to help Alcheon* (Shadow doesn't hate Alcheon, exactly, but he doesn't much like him... )
Well, you did just kill all the people you and him used to call friends...
(Back)
(Then sure, make a sequel. )
... Ooook?
(Tiffany, are you controlling 3 chars?)
(Ok what's going on?)
Well I must admit, the ending was a bit short... Super time skipped Oh, well, I suppose it doesn't matter :-/
(A sequel? Already? But you've barely started! At least it seems that way to me...)
Shadow: *Walks around town, carrying an unconscious Alcheon, looking for Alcheon's sister*
Sorry, I've written a lot further than this on paper... New characters won't be introduced for like 6-7 more chapters SOWEE!!!