Separate names with a comma.
I think it's a nice start, but you should write a little more.
Luke: -rolls eyes- I have to put up with you for the rest of the summer? And the school year, until I go home for a week.
Don't worry, I won't… but we need to stop spamming Sophia's thread
Angela: -sits under a tree-
(Yeah you can have as many characters as you want)
(*.)
Luke: Well, it looks like we're going to be roommates, so you better start caring:
Angela: -goes up to Holiday- When are we starting? Holiday: Once everyone wakes up. You know how the vampires are…
Luke: -sees Ben- Hi, I'm Luke. I'm warlock just like you.
Luke: -wakes up and sits in cabin- Angela: -wakes up and walks outside-
Don't make me go all rage mode on you… and/or say my long rant again
(hiUrock, please say the name of your characters) Holiday: -sees Ben- You must be Ben! You're cabin arrangement is right here, so you can go...
(While we wait for everyone to get on you can arrive at camp late and introduce yourself and stuff)
Well… -clears throat for long rant- These are rice cakes. If you haven't had them before, they're really good. Although, I've had cube rice...
(I hate FC it's so annoying)
(He was going to quit PIMD)
Yummy cookies!! (Even though those aren't actually cookies)
( I'm just waiting for everyone to get on)
( You're back!! Accepted, of course)
It's fine, you didn't see it. ATTENTION EVERYONE!! The girl does not live in a red brick two story house!!! She is homeless!!!