Separate names with a comma.
(OMG!!! Is it like cousins with fluzzfy? I love the word fluzzfy!! It's so pearful!!!!)
(Papaya, papaya, papaya pants! P-A-P-A-Y-A PANTS! I forget the rest of the words. But that's where I learned how to spell papaya a while ago....
But I think this is going to turn out to be a great story
(You know, like Papaya Pants?)
(IT'S SPELLED PAPAYA)
1.) It's 'their' by the way. 2.) Auto correct. 3.) Capitalization and punctuation. 4.) What she said
I love the start so far!
Angela: Lily, not all vampires are mean.
(I gtg bbl)
And I think you should add a little more detail, so we can clearly see a picture of what's happening. Just some criticism… I'm trying to...
Angela: -glares at Lily- Not all vampires are.
/).-) FAIL. If Sophia can't update, I guess I will…
Shadow: -sharpens knife-
Angela: Holiday has helped every other vampire who came here. I'm sure she can help you.
Angela: -laughs- Everyone wants to kill him. He's a jerk.
Angela: So… what do you want to do now?
Angela: That comes naturally to vampires. Don't worry, just… kill some animals.
Angela: -sheaths sword-
Angela: -laughs-
Angela: Training. That's all I have to say. -smiles-