Separate names with a comma.
Dawn: -turns invisible, still watching them-
Angela: -starts fighting zombies-
Dawn: -smirks- What happened to team Jack?
YES!!! UPDATE!!!!
Dawn: -watches everyone-
Angela: -walks around- Boooring…
Angela: -walks around-
Allie: I love it!
Are there even any poems on FF?
Dawn: -watches Jack-
…Can't think of any other completed stories.
BEST FRIEND!!!!! TILL THE DEATH OF ME!!!!
Dawn: -watches Jack- He'll never learn.
I LOVE THIS!!!!
Dawn: -meditates-
Bump
Poor Adam.
Allie: Sure. -grins-
I like the detail. You should put punctuation after the dialogue, and double space the paragraphs so it's easier to read. And you shouldn't say...
Angela: -sits under a tree- Luke: -gets food-