Separate names with a comma.
Holiday: -grabs phone out of Jack's hand- No Jack day.
Sammi: -eats- Selynn: -eats-
Dawn: -takes someone's soul-
Sammi: -rolls eyes again- Selynn: -starts eating-
I read the first one before I saw that…
Sammi: -hears Jack and rolls her eyes- Selynn: -ignores Jack-
There's a whole row of
Sammi and Selynn: -go to the cafeteria and sit down-
Sammi and Selynn: -walk around- Dawn: -meditates- Alyssa, Alllie and Angela: -sit by the lake-
I wanna punch that ******* for hurting you
But he makes you sad too
I HATE HIM!!!!
I'M GOING TO KILL HIM FOR HURTING YOU!!!!
I will, but it might take some time because I have to update my story with toxic… and I have no idea what to do for that either
Because you're awesome
Dawn: -watches Julia-
I'm not a hater. I want you to continue the story, but I agree you shouldn't clog up FF with this.
I like the detail, it's pretty good. A good start to the story. Just use paragraphs, and a few typos:)
Poor Eli