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I walked into school monday morning all nervous for my first day of school. I didn't know what to expect. I was so nervous my stomach felt like...
Jessica: ;grabs my shampoo and a towel i find on the extra dresser and grabs a pink tank top and jean shorts;
Jessica: Alright thank you. ;walks to my room wnd puts my puppy on the bed and goes over to my bed;
Jessica: Where are the showers?
Jessica: okay. ;goes to the front and sees a male caretaker; Excuse me sir?
Jesica: Hi -is a bit shy- Are you okay?
Jessica: -arrives at Akiko's room- Um excuse me?
Jessica: -tells Lilly I am going around the house an leaves the cafeteria going to Akiko's room-
Jessica:- kisses puppies head-
Jessica: Can I meet them?
Jessica: Me too. ;holds my puppy to my side; Have you met anyone else while you were here?
Jessica- How long have you been here Lily?
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Jessica: Thank you. Woyld you like to pet her?
Jessica: -says to lilly- I'm Jessica. I'm 15. And this is my dog, Kianna.
Jessica: -takes the bag- Thank you. ;goes back to talking to lilly;
Jessica- ;tells the cafeteria worker; bacon flavor treats.
Jessica: ;says to lilly; Yes I get a bit lonely. What is your name?
Jessica: ;tells the cafeteria worker; Some doggy treats for my dog.