Separate names with a comma.
(I gtg sorry)
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Matt: Me too
Matt: Not much, just hanging around and training. What about you?
I think the amount of rps now is good. Four. Not too many, not too little. So no one should be making more rps, unless one dies.
This sounds like a love triangle, though. There are waaaaay too many love triangle stories.
I agree with Adam about everything except what your story's about. That's your choice, and I don't care what you make it about. Unless you...
Matt: Great. How are you?
Matt: Hey Rhyan
Just a reminder to you, Sky… UPDATE!!!!
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Selynn: Hey Zelos
GREAT TIPS!!!
I agree that rpers have a right to be on ff, but it should be reasonable. People shouldn't be making new rps each day. There's plenty now.
In your section for spelling, there's a spelling mistake.
Work on your grammar and spelling, and proofread to catch mistakes. Otherwise,
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Matt: -walks around-
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