Separate names with a comma.
BUMP!!
I LOOOOOVE your cats!!
You're welcome:) I'm sure you'll get a lot better!
Both of you
Awwww Sky!! It's okay:(
OMG I just died. Your kitty is SO ADORABLE
Well, yes… It's so good! I can't help but love it! The details, the emotion… it's amazing!!!
Remember to put dialogue in and make it longer!! As Sky would say, DETAILS DETAILS DETAILS!!
OMG SKY I LOOOOOOOOOOVE THIS
Reread everything to fix spelling mistakes and other things.
Capitalize your I's and spell out the words. Don't type ur, type your.
And try not to repeat the same thing in both POVs, because then it just gets repetitive. Use LOTS of details. More details!!
So is Allie's.
Because Jake's POV is one long run on sentence. Use commas and/or periods.
*Dialogue
Use quotation marks, check your spelling, make it longer, and put punctuation at the end of dialougue.
So I don't want this here. But we can't always get what we want -shrugs-
And I still think there's already too many rps
So… you should probably start writing, then…