Separate names with a comma.
Oh and btw you spelled Kristelle wrong…
Great job!
Update!!!
Update!!
AMAZING!
Bump!!
Yeah
Awesome! Bump!
I am really sorry, but I think there's already too many rps…
Bump
Wonderful job. Bump!
Eli should do it
I never knew that was censored… it's not a swear…
юююююююююююююююююююююю Perfection. If there was one thing Kristelle Merrick couldn't have, it was that. There was always that one flaw, that...
Bump!
Amazing!! Bump!!
Quotation marks for dialogue!!! And use shorter paragraphs. Great job!
Sounds great!
-raises hand- I'll do it, if someone else does it with me