Separate names with a comma.
It's a decent start. Remember to check your spelling and grammar, spell out words, like you instead of u, and start a new paragraph whenever a...
I'm trying to help… I think it's great, but everything has room for improvement. I love the detail:)
Sammi: -eats the rabbit then walks around the forest-
I think it's pretty good. This is my advice: 1. Spell out the words, like you instead of u. 2. Read it over to correct spelling and punctuation...
Sammi: -kills a rabbit and starts cooking it-
The details… description… emotion… it's all… so… stupendous
A brunette walks into her dorm to find her roommate, a blonde, with a rope tied around her waist. When she asks her why it's there, the blonde...
Why is a blonde's brain the size of a pea in the morning? It swells up overnight.
Pimd is the best. FC is way too confusing, and I never tried gaw or kaw
I too, am sorry. I love the details, and all I can say is… PARAGRAPHS!!
Yes!!! BUMP!!!
BUMP!!!
The murderer didn't see her, because she was hidden. Thank you everyone!
Scary
BUMPBUMPBUMPBUMPBUMPBUMP
Sammi: -walks around-
(Listen to Alex)
I can't believe you're that ignorant…
(*human)
( /).- That was an example of a typical White Cross human.)