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-I shiver and chuckle- "Your going to make my legs buckle doing that."
(nope lol.)
-I laugh- "It's the ninjutsu training I suppose." -I keep a steady pace heading for my house-
(Going mental gets you nowhere with me)
-I chuckle- "I don't normally give piggyback rides...but for you I'll make an exception." -I laugh and take off running-
(but the majority of your life was with Japanese people so it would have been replaced with their accent.)
"Having you is enough. I don't need anything else."
(Well if you were raised by Japanese people then you would have picked up their accent)
-I smile and tenderly return the kiss- "I don't have to but I want to."
(You didn't include that in your profile lol )
-I smirk looking up at the moon- "Your English accent is terrible. It's near impossible to hide your own. And you just confirmed what I didn't...
-I glance at the ground seeing it. I look back at her and smile- "I'll get you a new one."
"Do not get smart with me or it will be the last mistake I make. This place isn't the same as Japan. This is my territory."
(leave me bloody out of this )
-I smile and embrace her- "How have you been?"
-I let my cloak fall to the ground revealing myself- "I see everything that goes on in these woods. I knew when and where you were going to...
-I walk up onto the porch- "Hello Alida." -I smile-
-I speak knowing he can't see me but knowing he knew I was there- "I see you have come."
(There's no hope for them Lily I'm afraid) -I smile making my way to Alida's house-
-I wait silently on the edge of Sherwood for Tom. Im wrapped in my cloak making myself invisible to even the most trained eye in the night-