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It's getting there
Thank you and I promise, I'll help you as best I can
Jack: -walks back to his dorm, flopping on his bed- what did I just do...
No camps for no Here's what I can do for you: Think for a bit, atleast a day, and pm it to me and I'll help you make it good, okay?
Skyrim and Dragon Riders are very creative and I haven't seen many of them at all. But HalfBlood I have seen all the time
Jack: -waves- bye... -turns the corner and hits his head lightly on the wall- what did I just get myself into
What others have you made?
No, you read Percy Jackson, like 100 others, and you made a rp of it, like 100 others. There is nothing creative about this
(Scratch) Jack: sure
Jack: I'm just gonna leave
This is really overused and no, they're not dying because this is the 3rd one today
Jack: perfect, now I'll step over here and go -tries to sidestep her-
Jack: -still suspicious- okay, I'll make you a deal. -writes his number- you call this number, night or die and I'll be right over, okay?
Jack: -raises eyebrow- No killing?
Jack: I do like living...
Jack: what! She is pretty!
Jack: not really if it means I die...
Jack: -mumbles- you know I honestly liked her look better before
Jack: -turns to his head to the side-
Jack: -blushes widely-