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-I keep my balance throwing the cat to the side. My eyes glow beneath my hood indicating I'm glaring-
-I keep my balance steadying myself.- "So it would seem..." -I extend a hand to help her up-
-I burst through the forest nearly running into Alida again-
(I'm not a stick in the mud. It causes problems because everyone wants their character to win and people god mod)
(Not really. Too complicated. If there's one thing I've learned in my years of rp it's that fighting amongst main characters is overly complicated...
-I memorize the entire book in a matter of minutes and appear in a classroom placing it back into the case I got it from. I slip out the window...
-I blink both in surprise that she saw my face and find myself blushing from her compliment. I disappear in a wisp of shadow appearing in my room-...
-I turn backing up, magic crackling at my fingertips standing on guard. I look at the girl who had poked me.-
-I catch my breath and rise up fully. I glance around hopping no one saw my face-
-I see my pursuers closing in and fire a sparkling bolt from my fingertips. It's hits them knocking them out. I sigh in relief and place my hands...
-I round a corner and nearly run into Alida losing my balance and tumbling forward. My hood falls back revealing my blue eyes and dark brown hair....
(Well it would help if names were used...scratch my post) -I accelerate into a sprint-
Bump
-I see the flash in the corner of my eye and flick my wrist making the arrow shatter into a thousand shards before it reached me-
-I mount my horse and tap my heels to his flanks setting off at a steady canter-
(Me?)
(am I accepted?)
-I look over my shoulder hearing the footsteps getting louder. I speed up to a run the book I had taken under my arm-
(yay!) -I stroll casually around the school grounds my bow in hand. My strides are long and graceful-
(They are awesome are we accepted?)