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Pretty good start!!! One bit of advice: Make your updates a little longer. Great job!!
Luna: -kisses him with all the passion she can add- Vivian: -moves even closer-
Sammi: -watches-
Sammi: -turns into a mouse and sneaks back in, watching them-
Luna: -kisses him back and puts more passion- Vivian: Me neither -kisses him back-
Sammi: Uh… -turns around and runs out-
Luna: -wraps her arms around him-
Vivian: -squeezes his hand-
Sammi: -goes to the sandwich shop and sees Jack and Angel- Those were those people in the alley…
I already said that BUMP!!!
Wait, you're allowed to have that many talents?
Jake: -finishes and starts walking around- Sammi: -hides behind a trash can-
Vivian: Yeah, both of us
Sammi: -goes into an alley- Jake: -starts eating his lunch-
Luna: -kisses back- Vivian: No you are
Jake: -sits on a bench- Sammi: -continues walking-
Luna: -stares back at him-
Luna: Um… -blushes-
Vivian: So are you
(FALCO IS SO MUCH BETTER THAN CAPTAIN FALCON)