Separate names with a comma.
Read the whole review, cuz I'm cool like that. My friend was saying they have a new ipod, too. Is that true?
Awesome. Bump!!
YAY
Listen to what she said. Use quotation marks when people are speaking. Also, replace the smaller, weaker words with bigger, more descriptive...
Oh, that movie? I've seen tons of commercials for that… awesome story! Bump!
BUMP!!!!!!
ME!!!!!!!!!!
Great start! Remember to use TONS of details! Bump! =)
I LOVED IT
BUUUUUUMPPPPPP :F
AMAZING. BUMP.
Wonderful start
Try to use lots more detail, and write longer updates. I can't see where the story is going yet:)
Yay!
Great start! As jennete said, remember to use TONS of details. And replace the smaller words with bigger ones =) Use a thesaurus!
Hopefully not
Phenomenal update. I loved it!!
BUUUUUUUMPPPPPP
Awesome! Bump!!
I'm gonna wait a little… I don't want to overwhelm my readers, and I'm so tired right now…