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(You said you can read minds, drain energy, become shadows, and suddenly appear at the top of the empire state building? )
(Well your pretty much ruining this I mean how many power do you fuck-ing have?)
(Bro,you can't be god in this okay? You can't be invincible. Be a little realistic even for Greek/Roman gods)
Make updates longer.
Kat; -shoots an arrow at the one of copies head blocking a door, pulls Cane opens the door, locks it presses a button waits for elevator- Get on...
Kat: -grabs Cane, and runs in other direction, runs towards the empire state building, pushing past people, gets to top floor-
Kat: Glad to hear your plan -runs extremely fast, grabbing Cane, putting him on my back, runs to the subway station extremely fast-
Kat: -ducks it barely missing- What about Lily? Huh? I've seen the way you look at her. You love her.
Kat: And you are going to burn Earth? -steps closer to him-
Kat: Cane run! -pushes him away- Wait you said re born... You mean Drake and Neo?
Kat: -backs away slowly, Cane behind me,looking calm- So you are going to kill Jupiter and Mars?
(scratch that) Kat: What happened to you? -pulls Cane behind me-
Kat: -eyes are looking around for Chaos-
Kat: -looks at him sadly- It'll be okay. -hugs him, then stands, holds Cane's hand waiting for Chaos-
Kat: But what? -looks at him-
Kat: If I tell you to run. Do it. And run as fast as you can. Go somewhere and hide. -puts my phone in his pocket- Everyones phone number that...
Kat: -stands straight, waiting looking around- Cane promise me something. -kneels down in front of him, I put my hands in his-
Kat: Huh? -keeps running-
Kat: -laughs and starts running really fast, holding his legs-
Kat: Positive now hurry up.