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Kat: Hmmm. Sweet. I like the architecture on the roof. -let's cigarette fall to ground, steps on it-
Kat: -laughs, jumps off the trunk, smoking one hand in pocket, the other holding cigarette- It's kind of a dump. Where are we again?
Kat: -opens on the truck's back window- We there yet love birds?
(Well I woke up and I'm in the back!) Kat: -pulls out cigarette and smokes while sharpening knives-
(Okay Kat somehow was in the car Sorry in a pissy mood today. Try not to piss me off.) Kat: -in the back of the car sharpening knives-
(WHAT THE HELL DID I MISS GOD DAMN IT!!!! )
(The hell did I miss? )
Kat: Yeah buddy? -kneels down so that is eye level with him, elevator moves-
Kat: The gods will take care of it. -smiles at him, gets on elevator pushes button-
Kat: Going home. Come on. -puts arm around him and starts walking back to elevator-
(nah it's alright) Kat: -talks to them, after a couple of minutes, still hasn't looked at Apollo, walks back to Cane- Alright. Come on. Let's go home.
Kat; -walks up to the gods not looking at Apollo, explaining the situation about Chaos-
Kat: -runs to the throne room and burst through the door panting- Cane.. Wait... Wait here...
Or for Kat...
Kat: -gets a bit annoyed at the time wasted- Try to keep up with. -runs way ahead of Cane-
Kat: Cane I'm sorry but you have to make this fast.
Mmmmm.... Add more detail. Because I can't really picture much in much my head. That way it's more vivid in the readers head and it make updates...
Kat: What it is? -looks at him, kneels down in front of him-
Kat: Ya huh? -elevator doors opens- What is it? -looks at him-
(Draining energy isn't done by anyone (/).-) But ok....) Kat: -gets on elevator, pushes button, Cane is on back- I need you to hang on really...